My day

        Hi，everybody！My name is Guan Haoyue.I am a pupil.I am eleven years old.I’m a tall girl.I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning.I have breakfast at 6:40.I go to school at 7:00.I have four classes in the morning.I have lunch at12:30.In the afternoon，I have four classes，too. I go home at 5:50.I usually go to bed before 9:30.    I am very happy every day！         
        评:小作者清晰的向大家描述了她的一天，语句通顺，语法正确。通过她的描述，我们能感受到她的充实与开心！                       
        育才双语小学 五(4)班 管浩玥         辅导教师：杜海珍